Thursday, February 28, 2013

{The Midnight Visit} Chapter 3










“Rosalie, Rosalie!” Mum called, “Breakfast is nearly over!”
“Oh, I’m coming” Rosalie yawned. She slowly ate her breakfast half asleep.
“Are you OK, Rosalie?” her mum asked.
“Yeah, I’m fine.” Rosalie replied. She grinned, “I can’t wait until tonight”, she said, still grinning.
“Why?” asked her mother, puzzled.
“Oh, just because I’m going to see Mimi and her pony, Tongo, tonight,” she said quickly.
“Mum, can I please text Mimi on your phone?” Rosalie asked. 
“Ok.” Her mother agreed.
Rosalie wrote this:                         
Dear Mimi,
Can I come over to your
house today?
It’s ok with my mum.
Xoxo

Then a few minutes later Mimi replied and said, yes. 
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Later, while Rosalie was playing with Mimi, she asked if she could have a halter. “Of course not!” came the answer, “You don’t even have a horse!”
After dinner at Mimi’s house Rosalie went home.
Before bed she slipped a big carrot behind her back. 
“I have a big carrot for you Dawn.” She whispered, “I love you.”
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It was midnight when the whinny came again. But this time it was low and mournful, as if someone was in pain. Thousands of scary thoughts came into Rosalie's mind.
Was something wrong with Dawn?
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Why do you think Rosalie wanted to borrow a halter from her friend Mimi?
Have you ever fed a carrot or an apple to a horse? 

9 comments:

  1. here is another chapter!
    From the next chapter and on its a little bit sacry!!

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  2. I have fed a horse an apple before, I like their soft lips with prickly whiskers!
    I can just feel it getting more and more exciting! Good work Jada!

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  3. I have never fed a horse but I would love to. I think she wanted a halter so she could ride dawn . From Ruby.

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    1. You are right Ruby!! She did want the halter to ride Dawn.
      Xo Jada
      P.s where do you live?

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    2. I live in Napier. Looking forward to reading chapter 4 of your story. Have a nice day!

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  5. Hi Jada, I really like your story and I can't wait for the next chapter. I ask Mum every day if you have written it yet. I started writing a story too, when I am finished I will post it to you to read.
    Love from Cheyenne

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  6. I can't wait until the next chapter! I think she wanted to have a halter because she wanted to ride Dawn. I have feed a carrot, but not an apple.
    Love Petra

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