{The Midnight Visit} Chapter Two

That afternoon while Rosalie was playing with her friends she thought about the horse. 
Ok, before I go to bed I’ll get some sugar lumps and an apple just in case he or she comes back, Rosalie thought. 
“Hey!” Rosalie’s friend Mimi called “ Come and play with us!” 
Rosalie remembered her friends, “ Yeah, coming” she called back. 
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That night Rosalie lay awake listening for the loud whinny. Then she heard it. She crept out of bed slowly. She ran down the stairway, through the lounge and clambered down the steps into the garden. Rosalie stared at the sight before her. She gasped. There in the moonlight stood the horse tall and proud. Her mane and tail flowing in the wind. 
Then, as if by magic, the horse turned and ate the apple and sugar. She nickered happily. Then, as the new day dawned, the beautiful bay galloped away. 
Rosalie laughed “ I hope mum doesn’t mind the sugar lumps gone, Dawn!”
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Do you like my story so far?
Do you think Dawn is a good name for the horse?